fixed tutorial

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 0a49964..9e688e3 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -30,29 +30,33 @@ sudo umount jessie
 Initial (manual) setup on external SD card on the Phone via Android Debugger:
 
 ```
-adb root
-adb shell
+adb root && adb wait-for-device && adb shell
 mkdir -p /storage/sdcard1/Linux/jessie
 exit
 adb push jessie.img /storage/sdcard1/Linux
 adb shell
 cd /storage/sdcard1/Linux
+
 # Show used loop devices
 losetup -f
+
 # Use the next free one (replace the loop number)
 losetup /dev/block/loop1 $(pwd)/jessie.img
 mount -t ext4 /dev/block/loop1 $(pwd)/jessie
+
 # Bind-Mound proc, dev, sys`
 busybox mount --bind /proc $(pwd)/jessie/proc
 busybox mount --bind /dev $(pwd)/jessie/dev
 busybox mount --bind /dev/pts $(pwd)/jessie/dev/pts
 busybox mount --bind /sys $(pwd)/jessie/sys
+
 # Bind-Mound the rest of Android
 mkdir -l $(pwd)/jessie/storage/sdcard{0,1}
 busybox mount --bind /mnt/shell/emulated \
   $(pwd)/jessie/storage/sdcard0
 busybox mount --bind /storage/sdcard1 \
   $(pwd)/jessie/storage/sdcard1
+
 # Check mounts
 mount | grep jessie
 ```
@@ -62,17 +66,25 @@ Second debootstrap stage, but inside the chroot on android!
 LD_PRELOAD='' chroot $(pwd)/jessie /bin/bash -l
 export PATH=/bin:/usr/bin:/usr/local/bin:/sbin:/usr/sbin:/usr/local/sbin
 /debootstrap/debootstrap --second-stage
-exit
+exit # Leave chroot
+exit # Leave adb shell
 ```
 
-Last setup steps
+Setup various scripts:
 
 ```
+# jessie.sh
+adb push storage/sdcard1/Linux/jessie.sh /storage/sdcard/Linux/
+adb shell
+cd /storage/sdcard1/Linux
 sh jessie.sh enter
+
+# Bashrc
 cat <<END >~/.bashrc
 export PATH=/usr/local/sbin:/usr/local/bin:/usr/sbin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/bin:$PATH
 export EDITOR=vim
 hostname $(cat /etc/hostname)
+
 # Fixing an error messages while loading the profile
 sed -i s#id#/usr/bin/id# /etc/profile
 
@@ -87,10 +99,10 @@ deb http://ftp.uk.debian.org/debian/ jessie main contrib non-free
 deb-src http://ftp.uk.debian.org/debian/ jessie main contrib non-free
 END
 apt-get update
-exit
+exit # Exit chroot
 ```
 
-Debroid services startup
+Debroid services startup (we don't use the Debian runlevels)
 ```
 sh jessie.sh enter
 cat <<END > /etc/rc.debroid
@@ -99,18 +111,10 @@ service uptimed status &>/dev/null || service uptimed start
 exit 0
 END
 chmod 0755 /etc/rc.debroid
-exit
+exit # Exit chroot
+exit # Exit adb shell
 ```
 
-Enter chroot script (as root):
-
-```
-cp jessie.sh /storage/sdcard1/Linux/jessie.sh
-cd /storage/sdcard1/Linux
-sh jessie.sh enter
-cat /etc/debian_version
-exit
-```
 
 Include to Android startup (userinit.sh seems not to work on CM12, so we use a different way here):
 
@@ -124,6 +128,7 @@ Afterwards install a program like ROM Toolbox and add the following bootup comma
 /system/bin/sh /data/local/debroid.sh
 ```
 
+Reboot & test!
 
-Enjoy!
 
+Enjoy!